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Text from KaidiV - English

  • Please correct. Story continued.

  • The day began to arrive in the evening and I decided to find a suitable place for my tent.
  • I walked more 20 minutes when I saw beautifully suiting place under the birch which is front of the forest, and it is a bit higher level with rest area.
  • I thought it would be nice seeing on the mouth of the tent when sunset began.
  • To be continued.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English