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The day began to arrive in the evening and I decided to find a suitable place for my tent.
I walked more 20 minutes when I saw beautifully suiting place under the birch which is front of the forest, and it is a bit higher level with rest area.
I thought it would be nice seeing on the mouth of the tent when sunset began.
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문장 1
- The day began to arrive in the evening and I decided to find a suitable place for my tent.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I walked more 20 minutes when I saw beautifully suiting place under the birch which is front of the forest, and it is a bit higher level with rest area.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I thought it would be nice seeing on the mouth of the tent when sunset began.
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문장 4
- To be continued.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4