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  • Some people think sports can build one's character.

  • There is no secret that many people expect sports to build their characters.
  • For instance I know a woman who makes her son do boxing.
  • He is often teased at school and not capable of protecting himself from being beaten up.
  • So she hopes he will be taught to hit back.
  • Will her wish come true?
  • In my view it will because doing any sport helps people to be more confident and persistent.
  • I believe that guy will learn to be braver.
  • I'm sure he will be a man of decision.
  • Probably it'll be very difficult to to inflict someone's views upon him.
  • He will be able to venture on bald steps.
  • He can be respected by his friends and family.
  • But there is another side of the coin.
  • Who guarantees he won't get selfish?
  • One day he can be seen standing in front of a mirror for hours.
  • What will he think about?
  • Maybe "How good I am!"or something like that.
  • In fact sports will make him more stubborn and healthier but also egoistic.
  • Perhaps he will think everybody must admire him.
  • So what conclusion may be made?
  • Sports can teach people not to be shy about anything but it's necessary that one should not overdo sports.

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