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Hello everybody !
I'm from France, in Limoges exactly.
I would like to learn english because i wan't to go in America for become an au pair.
Since two months, I make a baby sitting.
I guard two childrens of five and eight years old.
I love this work but i'm so tired after because the children run everywhere.
I have study in secretary.
Now, I want to work with childrens because my mother is nursery assistant and i like to help her.
My hobbies are sport (swimming, running...), go out with my friends, listen to music, visit nearly countries with my brother...
Thanks everybody for correct my texte. :)

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- I'm from France, in Limoges exactly.
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- I would like to learn english because i wan't to go in America for become an au pair.
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- Since two months, I make a baby sitting.
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- I guard two childrens of five and eight years old.
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- I love this work but i'm so tired after because the children run everywhere.
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- I have study in secretary.
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- Now, I want to work with childrens because my mother is nursery assistant and i like to help her.
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- My hobbies are sport (swimming, running...), go out with my friends, listen to music, visit nearly countries with my brother...
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- Thanks everybody for correct my texte. :)
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9