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從ma87來的文本 - English

Hello everybody !
I'm from France, in Limoges exactly.
I would like to learn english because i wan't to go in America for become an au pair.
Since two months, I make a baby sitting.
I guard two childrens of five and eight years old.
I love this work but i'm so tired after because the children run everywhere.
I have study in secretary.
Now, I want to work with childrens because my mother is nursery assistant and i like to help her.
My hobbies are sport (swimming, running...), go out with my friends, listen to music, visit nearly countries with my brother...
Thanks everybody for correct my texte. :)

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- Hello everybody !
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- I'm from France, in Limoges exactly.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I would like to learn english because i wan't to go in America for become an au pair.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Since two months, I make a baby sitting.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I guard two childrens of five and eight years old.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I love this work but i'm so tired after because the children run everywhere.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I have study in secretary.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Now, I want to work with childrens because my mother is nursery assistant and i like to help her.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- My hobbies are sport (swimming, running...), go out with my friends, listen to music, visit nearly countries with my brother...
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- Thanks everybody for correct my texte. :)
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9