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Hello everyone!
This is my first year at university.
I'm currently getting a degree in Medicine at the national university of my country.
One of my dreams is becoming a doctor and help other people, and thus feeling that I am giving my knowledge and efforts to make this country and this world a better place.
The degree is a lot of fun, but it takes a lot of hard work.
So I am planning to study a lot and enjoy every moment at maximum.
When I finish this degree, I plan to get a postgraduate study of Cardiology.

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- Hello everyone!
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- This is my first year at university.
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- I'm currently getting a degree in Medicine at the national university of my country.
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- One of my dreams is becoming a doctor and help other people, and thus feeling that I am giving my knowledge and efforts to make this country and this world a better place.
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- The degree is a lot of fun, but it takes a lot of hard work.
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- So I am planning to study a lot and enjoy every moment at maximum.
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- When I finish this degree, I plan to get a postgraduate study of Cardiology.
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