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  • University

  • Hello everyone!
  • This is my first year at university.
  • I'm currently getting a degree in Medicine at the national university of my country.
  • One of my dreams is becoming a doctor and help other people, and thus feeling that I am giving my knowledge and efforts to make this country and this world a better place.
  • The degree is a lot of fun, but it takes a lot of hard work.
  • So I am planning to study a lot and enjoy every moment at maximum.
  • When I finish this degree, I plan to get a postgraduate study of Cardiology.

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