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  • It is very sad to watch on TV a lot of people with masks against pollution, or to see volunteers trying to save environment by human’s hand.
  • Some people believe that car is the most comfortable invention of all time, and they prefer using it also for a short stretch of road.
  • Probably they don’t imagine how beautiful is walking in the nature.
  • Maybe they are the same who prefer throwing off trash and fill garbage peripheral roads, or draining cleaners in rivers and seas.
  • Theese “little” actions had created through time a great damage to the environment.
  • However we could save the environment but how?
  • I firmly believe that bus and metro are better than car, you can meet a lot of people with whom to spend your time, so why don’t we use it?
  • On the other hand, as regard rivers, seas and trash is very hard to change mentality, because they prefer easy money (with draining cleaners) instead of nature.
  • In my view humans are too lazy to change their attitude, so we should hope in a strictly control by police.

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