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  • Essay

  • It is very sad to watch on TV a lot of people with masks against pollution, or to see volunteers trying to save environment by human’s hand.
  • Some people believe that car is the most comfortable invention of all time, and they prefer using it also for a short stretch of road.
  • Probably they don’t imagine how beautiful is walking in the nature.
  • Maybe they are the same who prefer throwing off trash and fill garbage peripheral roads, or draining cleaners in rivers and seas.
  • Theese “little” actions had created through time a great damage to the environment.
  • However we could save the environment but how?
  • I firmly believe that bus and metro are better than car, you can meet a lot of people with whom to spend your time, so why don’t we use it?
  • On the other hand, as regard rivers, seas and trash is very hard to change mentality, because they prefer easy money (with draining cleaners) instead of nature.
  • In my view humans are too lazy to change their attitude, so we should hope in a strictly control by police.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • It is very sad to watch on TV a lot of people with masks against pollution, or to see volunteers trying to save environment by human’s hand.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • Some people believe that car is the most comfortable invention of all time, and they prefer using it also for a short stretch of road.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Maybe they are the same who prefer throwing off trash and fill garbage peripheral roads, or draining cleaners in rivers and seas.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • I firmly believe that bus and metro are better than car, you can meet a lot of people with whom to spend your time, so why don’t we use it?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • On the other hand, as regard rivers, seas and trash is very hard to change mentality, because they prefer easy money (with draining cleaners) instead of nature.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • In my view humans are too lazy to change their attitude, so we should hope in a strictly control by police.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9