添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

donronからのテキスト - English

  • It is my first text

  • Hello I am begin my study the english language.
  • I don't i know many words but i want very much learn I hope other people can help me this journey Thank you for dedicate a few minutes for help me

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English