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It is my first text
Hello I am begin my study the english language.
I don't i know many words but i want very much learn I hope other people can help me this journey Thank you for dedicate a few minutes for help me

donronFebruary 2016赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- It is my first text
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello I am begin my study the english language.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I don't i know many words but i want very much learn I hope other people can help me this journey Thank you for dedicate a few minutes for help me
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2