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  • second part of a work intership report

  • Problems Firstly, I would like to mention one problem I have encountered during my internship so far it refers the fact that we had to use a different uniform comparably in front of the other personal at the hotel.
  • That fact made us felt such an almost estrangers far from been part of the team.
  • In addition, the atmosphere was became quite uncomfortable because the others members of the company were not showed to have a healthy work environment instead of that, they have showed rude and impolite, it could make the internships thought that they were not very received.
  • The mentors never had enough time to explain any doubts, getting to the point that I had to handle all the work on my own making decisions that could have gone a bit wrong.
  • Recommendations I would make the following recommendations: • To take the time to explain the work that had been ask to the internship.
  • • To make the internships feel part of a team, the more that internships are involved the more they take the real responsibility of their work.

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    • Problems Firstly, I would like to mention one problem I have encountered during my internship so far it refers the fact that we had to use a different uniform comparably in front of the other personal at the hotel.
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    • In addition, the atmosphere was became quite uncomfortable because the others members of the company were not showed to have a healthy work environment instead of that, they have showed rude and impolite, it could make the internships thought that they were not very received.
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    • The mentors never had enough time to explain any doubts, getting to the point that I had to handle all the work on my own making decisions that could have gone a bit wrong.
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    • Recommendations I would make the following recommendations: • To take the time to explain the work that had been ask to the internship.
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    • • To make the internships feel part of a team, the more that internships are involved the more they take the real responsibility of their work.
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