Korektoj

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Text from happywhale - English

  • Motivation letter

  • Dear ★★★ University representatives I am a second year student of (my subject) at Charles University in Prague and I am writing to apply for a (kind of) Scholarship to become able to participate in the International Summer School 2016 at the University of (some English name).
  • I was excited to learn about the opportunity to apply for this scholarship as it would give me a chance to participate in this Summer School Program.
  • It was about a year ago when I heard many positive references about the Program from my senior, (name), who was fortunate to become one of the participants to the Program two years ago and then also from my classmates (name) and (name again) who were chosen to participate last year.
  • The many lectures they had attended there meant for both of them an important starting point for their nowadays research.
  • As I was given to understand there appeared exceptional guests to give a lecture in previous years, among them for example the professor Great.
  • I greatly respect professor Great’s work and it would be of my biggest honour were I to meet a persona of her stature and importance in the field of (some kind of) anthropology and anthropology generally.
  • In summer 2015 I was chosen as a representative of the Czech Republic in the “★★★ Program for Overseas Students 2015” at (some far away country), mediated by the (country's) embassy in Prague.
  • For me this stay was a great experience of a living language and besides a considerable improvement in ★★★ it also meant to me a significant encouragement for my next study.
  • It has always been one of my biggest aspirations to major the subject of (as stated above).
  • When I was on high school I was confronted with (that) culture for the first time and it immediately became a special matter to my heart.
  • I was charmed by the many differences diverging from the standards I had been raised in.
  • On the other hand I also liked discovering the features we both have in common.
  • Then I entered the Charles University in order to devote myself to the study of ★★★ people and to master the ★★★ language.
  • As for the purpose of my studies I would like to come to a full understanding of the ★★★ culture, its historical background, political context, and last but not least the economy outcomes and how this all influence its people, all of which I find to be very fascinating.
  • At present I am focusing mainly on the study of ★★★ language, consequently I also study classical ★★★, society, literature, history to have a broader grasp of the whole.
  • Philology and the language overall has an exceptional significance to me.
  • I have always been interested in the relation between language, thought and human behaviour.
  • Why differences occur between cultures and the subject of patterns of cultures fascinates me and I would like to head in this direction even in the future.
  • I am eager and determined to overcome any problems or difficulties on the way to my goals.
  • I like encountering new things and situations, meeting new people and being confronted with new thoughts and opinions.
  • Now that I am on my way to successfully complete the second year of my studies I would like to take advantage of the recently gained knowledge and make it to some use even outside the borders of our university and share my enthusiasm for the subject also with other international students, to learn new things that go even beyond my ordinary curriculum so I could broaden my horizons and gain even more profound insight into the subject.
  • Another significant advantage of the Program I perceive is it is being held entirely in English.
  • I am accustomed to using English as a medium for my study, as many materials are in English only, nevertheless the language in which the lectures are delivered at my university is Czech and so are the discussions on the subject.
  • For that reason I would like to become more experienced when speaking in the language that is not my mother tongue.
  • For my future career I regard it to be very meaningful to develop some academic language knowledge and a skill that would enable me to give a fluent and confident performance on the subject.
  • ★★★ is not only a very specific country as such but in the eyes of many Europeans it still has somewhat of an exotic aura to it.
  • In the future I would like to contribute to the mutual understanding, for if people can understand one another they can also share sympathy and in effect, cooperate much easily.
  • Through the prism of different cultures we can rediscover our own roots and learn how to refine and appreciate our own culture, while at the same time to stay humble and respectful to others.
  • It is important to search for cultural differences not for shallow comparison but to reflect our own selves and seek improvement.
  • I believe ★★★ culture is an exact instance of a country having much potential for us Europeans in this account.
  • ... the end didn't fit... but I would be really really grateful if someone was so kind to correct my messy text. Thank you ❤

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • Dear ★★★ University representatives I am a second year student of (my subject) at Charles University in Prague and I am writing to apply for a (kind of) Scholarship to become able to participate in the International Summer School 2016 at the University of (some English name).
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • I was excited to learn about the opportunity to apply for this scholarship as it would give me a chance to participate in this Summer School Program.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • It was about a year ago when I heard many positive references about the Program from my senior, (name), who was fortunate to become one of the participants to the Program two years ago and then also from my classmates (name) and (name again) who were chosen to participate last year.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • The many lectures they had attended there meant for both of them an important starting point for their nowadays research.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • As I was given to understand there appeared exceptional guests to give a lecture in previous years, among them for example the professor Great.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • I greatly respect professor Great’s work and it would be of my biggest honour were I to meet a persona of her stature and importance in the field of (some kind of) anthropology and anthropology generally.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • In summer 2015 I was chosen as a representative of the Czech Republic in the “★★★ Program for Overseas Students 2015” at (some far away country), mediated by the (country's) embassy in Prague.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • For me this stay was a great experience of a living language and besides a considerable improvement in ★★★ it also meant to me a significant encouragement for my next study.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • When I was on high school I was confronted with (that) culture for the first time and it immediately became a special matter to my heart.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • Then I entered the Charles University in order to devote myself to the study of ★★★ people and to master the ★★★ language.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14
    • As for the purpose of my studies I would like to come to a full understanding of the ★★★ culture, its historical background, political context, and last but not least the economy outcomes and how this all influence its people, all of which I find to be very fascinating.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
    • At present I am focusing mainly on the study of ★★★ language, consequently I also study classical ★★★, society, literature, history to have a broader grasp of the whole.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
  • Frazo 17
  • Frazo 18
    • Why differences occur between cultures and the subject of patterns of cultures fascinates me and I would like to head in this direction even in the future.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18
  • Frazo 19
  • Frazo 20
    • I like encountering new things and situations, meeting new people and being confronted with new thoughts and opinions.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20
  • Frazo 21
    • Now that I am on my way to successfully complete the second year of my studies I would like to take advantage of the recently gained knowledge and make it to some use even outside the borders of our university and share my enthusiasm for the subject also with other international students, to learn new things that go even beyond my ordinary curriculum so I could broaden my horizons and gain even more profound insight into the subject.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 21ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 21
  • Frazo 22
  • Frazo 23
    • I am accustomed to using English as a medium for my study, as many materials are in English only, nevertheless the language in which the lectures are delivered at my university is Czech and so are the discussions on the subject.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 23ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 23
  • Frazo 24
    • For that reason I would like to become more experienced when speaking in the language that is not my mother tongue.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 24ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 24
  • Frazo 25
    • For my future career I regard it to be very meaningful to develop some academic language knowledge and a skill that would enable me to give a fluent and confident performance on the subject.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 25ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 25
  • Frazo 26
    • ★★★ is not only a very specific country as such but in the eyes of many Europeans it still has somewhat of an exotic aura to it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 26ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 26
  • Frazo 27
    • In the future I would like to contribute to the mutual understanding, for if people can understand one another they can also share sympathy and in effect, cooperate much easily.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 27ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 27
  • Frazo 28
    • Through the prism of different cultures we can rediscover our own roots and learn how to refine and appreciate our own culture, while at the same time to stay humble and respectful to others.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 28ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 28
  • Frazo 29
    • It is important to search for cultural differences not for shallow comparison but to reflect our own selves and seek improvement.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 29ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 29
  • Frazo 30
    • I believe ★★★ culture is an exact instance of a country having much potential for us Europeans in this account.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 30ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 30
  • Frazo 31
    • ... the end didn't fit... but I would be really really grateful if someone was so kind to correct my messy text. Thank you ❤
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 31ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 31