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Why adopting children from other countries is bad
As for me adopting children from other countries is a big chance both to parents and the child.
Because he can get multicultural , learn more languages and find his place on this palanet.
But the statistics shows that most adopted from other countries children fell in slayvery after it and this is disgusting .
In my mind , our day's doing something like this even if youre not a boss of a big company and people spend their life for your rising money there no need in slayvermy . Am i right?

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- Why adopting children from other countries is bad
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- As for me adopting children from other countries is a big chance both to parents and the child.
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Sentence 2
- Because he can get multicultural , learn more languages and find his place on this palanet.
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- But the statistics shows that most adopted from other countries children fell in slayvery after it and this is disgusting .
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Sentence 4
- In my mind , our day's doing something like this even if youre not a boss of a big company and people spend their life for your rising money there no need in slayvermy . Am i right?
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