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Text from SiriusK - English

  • Why adopting children from other countries is bad

  • As for me adopting children from other countries is a big chance both to parents and the child.
  • Because he can get multicultural , learn more languages and find his place on this palanet.
  • But the statistics shows that most adopted from other countries children fell in slayvery after it and this is disgusting .
  • In my mind , our day's doing something like this even if youre not a boss of a big company and people spend their life for your rising money there no need in slayvermy . Am i right?

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    • But the statistics shows that most adopted from other countries children fell in slayvery after it and this is disgusting .
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    • In my mind , our day's doing something like this even if youre not a boss of a big company and people spend their life for your rising money there no need in slayvermy . Am i right?
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4