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  • International travel - CAE training writing test

  • Nowadays, traveling abroad has become very common and more and more people choose to spend their holyday in another country.
  • The first reason to this phenomenon is the fact that the price of a plane ticket has reduced significantly these past decades.
  • Low-cost companies appeared and broke up the market, allowing many people to afford traveling to foreign countries, which was considered as a luxury 20 or 30 years ago.
  • Obviously, tourism is not the only reason why people travel at the present time.
  • There are also a lot of workers and businessmen.
  • Indeed, with the increase of multinational companies, many employees have to travel abroad for their work as well as entrepreneurs who deal business at an international scale.
  • There is another category of travelers that has appeared thanks to universities programs such as Erasmus.
  • These programs prompt students to live and study abroad for one year are so.
  • Moreover, this kind of travelers goes back home regularly to see their friends and family.
  • Finally, thanks to the internet and other types of media, people have access to a lot of information about different kind of cultures throughout the globe.
  • Many countries developed their tourism thanks to an efficient marketing and communication, attracting tourists through videos, TV or even through the cinema.
  • In conclusion, traveling abroad has increased a lot these last years for many reasons: lower prices of flying tickets, raising number of multinationals, financial help to study abroad and the impact of the media upon people´s views about foreign countries.
  • We can presume that, in the future, transports will keep improving, reducing the time of traveling and thus increasing the international travel rate.

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    • Nowadays, traveling abroad has become very common and more and more people choose to spend their holyday in another country.
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    • The first reason to this phenomenon is the fact that the price of a plane ticket has reduced significantly these past decades.
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    • Low-cost companies appeared and broke up the market, allowing many people to afford traveling to foreign countries, which was considered as a luxury 20 or 30 years ago.
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    • Indeed, with the increase of multinational companies, many employees have to travel abroad for their work as well as entrepreneurs who deal business at an international scale.
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    • Finally, thanks to the internet and other types of media, people have access to a lot of information about different kind of cultures throughout the globe.
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    • Many countries developed their tourism thanks to an efficient marketing and communication, attracting tourists through videos, TV or even through the cinema.
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    • In conclusion, traveling abroad has increased a lot these last years for many reasons: lower prices of flying tickets, raising number of multinationals, financial help to study abroad and the impact of the media upon people´s views about foreign countries.
      Vote now!
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    • We can presume that, in the future, transports will keep improving, reducing the time of traveling and thus increasing the international travel rate.
      Vote now!
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