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Effect computers on children - CAE writing practice
- I´ve just read your article about the negative effects of the internet and video games on children and I would like to add my standpoint to it.
- It is certainly true that children, at the present time, play less outside and have consequently less physical activities but this phenomenon is partly due to other factors than computers.
- Indeed, nowadays, parents are more worried about the security of their children and most of them don´t let their offsprings play outside like the previous generations when everybody knew each other in the neighborhood and people were part of a joint community.
- The other reason why children are often playing with a computer is because parents work a lot and are less available for their children.
- Besides, the internet can benefit children to improve their knowledge.
- Some schools and teachers use the internet and teach pupils how to use it to do a research for example.
- Regarding computer games, some studies have shown that they help to increase reflexes, sense of direction and quickness of mind.
- Obviously, it depends on the games we are talking about and the amount of hours children can spend on them.
- In conclusion, to put it in a nutshell, stating that some problems with children´s health or social behavior stem from the internet and computer games is a bit reducing from my viewpoint and I think that computers can be very useful for our children´s lives and development, relatively speaking of course.
- verob75
March 2016
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