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  • Educated Women

  • Nowadays, women’s role in society becomes more and more significant.
  • In the past, women were seen as a person who cleaned house, take care children and cooked.
  • They didn’t have some liberities.
  • Women didn’t have a chance to find a place in a business world and they didn’t even go to school.
  • Education is the most powerful weopan for a woman.
  • They can change the world.
  • Educating a woman means also to educate a generation, so they will teach their children which means the future.
  • Societies need more educated women because it is very important to set the things right; higher level of welfare are achievable, fertility and mortality rates will offset, and child literacy rates will rise.
  • Education can change people's perspectives and add value people's personality.
  • For example after graduaded an college we have lots of knowledge in different areas.
  • Like managing, accounting, marketing etc. These kind of contributions can make easy the find a good job.
  • Unemployment rates have seen as a big problems of communities.
  • Adding woman labor force is a good idea to follow a policy, so if women receive good education then they find a good place in industry and it will increase both countiries and world welfare.
  • If we look at the developed countries, we will see their women labor force rate is high.
  • For instance, in U.S.A this rates is more than 53%.

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