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  • I'm writing to apply for a full-time entry-level position with your organization.
  • I have over 5 years of experience working in the aircraft industry in NDT and the metallurgical fields.
  • It ranges from selecting the heat treatment and regime of forming required micro structures of titanium alloy for aviation applications, to providing NDT for parts of civil and combat aircraft engines.
  • I worked with various ultrasonic flaw detectors, thickness gauges for taking measurements of high and low-pressured turbine blades.
  • I have over 3 years of experience performing inspections with X-ray and ultrasonic workstations as operator and as the set-up man.
  • I can implement my engineering and research skills for improvements in both the quality control testing and the quality and efficiency of technological processes for fabricated production.
  • Thereby, to provide an opportunity of increasing the common level of output products.
  • I'm interested in building long-term cooperation by means of achieving the company's goals.
  • I consider that in comparison with Russia, US aircraft production has a higher level of work organization, that allows staff to realize more fully their maximum potential and this is a returned benefit to the company.
  • I look forward to learning more about career opportunities at your company.
  • If you have any questions, please contact me .
  • Thank you for your consideration and I wish you success in the development of this important area

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    • It ranges from selecting the heat treatment and regime of forming required micro structures of titanium alloy for aviation applications, to providing NDT for parts of civil and combat aircraft engines.
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    • I worked with various ultrasonic flaw detectors, thickness gauges for taking measurements of high and low-pressured turbine blades.
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    • I have over 3 years of experience performing inspections with X-ray and ultrasonic workstations as operator and as the set-up man.
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    • I can implement my engineering and research skills for improvements in both the quality control testing and the quality and efficiency of technological processes for fabricated production.
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    • I consider that in comparison with Russia, US aircraft production has a higher level of work organization, that allows staff to realize more fully their maximum potential and this is a returned benefit to the company.
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