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  • Check my opinion essay

  • In any occupation discipline is more important than talent.
  • There are people who suppose that it is much more necessary to be disciplined than talented while doing something.
  • But others believe that our talents play a key role in any occcupation.
  • In this essay I will try to express my point of view.
  • In my opinion , being disciplined is more essential.
  • Firstly, one gradually develops and improves his abilities and skills thanks to discipline.
  • Secondly, such crucial trait of one's character as being disciplined makes him more responsible.
  • One understands that working every day is his duty.
  • However, some people tend to believe that our talents are the most major thing in any occupation.
  • I disagree with them because only astounding abilities in something will not lead to great achievements.In some cases talents make people irresponsible.
  • They really lack in discipline.
  • In conclusion, I would like to say that even famous sociologists say that ninety percent of life success depends on discipline.
  • Certainly good abilities are not minor.
  • But despite of our facilities being important, discipline plays a key role in any occupation anyway.
  • Disciple is the gateway to success.

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