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  • The Time of my Life

  • The main idea of the story is to make the reader a little touch to the art world, to understand how actors or dancers have to mentally cope with their emotions overflowing, and as shown representations affect the viewers.
  • The theme of this story is an art as a whole.
  • The author raises a variety of issues of concern, such as psychological problem repressed emotions that could have a detrimental impact on the consciousness of the actor or dancer, the problem of the impact of performance on the audience mind.
  • At the beginning of the story the author introduces the reader to the charms and flaws of his profession.
  • He says that despite the euphoria he feels on stage, he also receives a devastating impact and broken feelings after the completion of a performance.
  • This complication.
  • In the plot of the story the author and his colleagues describe the scene a great job, the study of all the senses, which is poured into a brilliant production, which is called without a word.
  • The basis of this statement of three monologues, dance of Patrick, his wife Lisa and brother on stage Nicholas Ghana.
  • This performance was a huge success, people came out in tears after their performances.
  • Also, without a word it has been awarded six awards.
  • I believe that such a profession worthy of respect, it's a lot of work and really high standard that those people had been executed perfectly.
  • In my opinion the climax of the story is that the peak of the creation of this product.
  • The author states that this project was both frightening and exciting for him.
  • Not everyone, even creative people can openly tell about their most intimate thoughts of the viewer.
  • In conclusion, I want to say that the language of dance can express the thoughts which find their echo in the hearts of the audience and become a guiding light in their fulfillment.

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    • The main idea of the story is to make the reader a little touch to the art world, to understand how actors or dancers have to mentally cope with their emotions overflowing, and as shown representations affect the viewers.
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    • The author raises a variety of issues of concern, such as psychological problem repressed emotions that could have a detrimental impact on the consciousness of the actor or dancer, the problem of the impact of performance on the audience mind.
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    • He says that despite the euphoria he feels on stage, he also receives a devastating impact and broken feelings after the completion of a performance.
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    • In the plot of the story the author and his colleagues describe the scene a great job, the study of all the senses, which is poured into a brilliant production, which is called without a word.
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    • The basis of this statement of three monologues, dance of Patrick, his wife Lisa and brother on stage Nicholas Ghana.
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    • I believe that such a profession worthy of respect, it's a lot of work and really high standard that those people had been executed perfectly.
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    • In conclusion, I want to say that the language of dance can express the thoughts which find their echo in the hearts of the audience and become a guiding light in their fulfillment.
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