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Văn bản từ TanyaDudkina - English

  • The Time of my Life

  • The main idea of the story is to make the reader a little touch to the art world, to understand how actors or dancers have to mentally cope with their emotions overflowing, and as shown representations affect the viewers.
  • The theme of this story is an art as a whole.
  • The author raises a variety of issues of concern, such as psychological problem repressed emotions that could have a detrimental impact on the consciousness of the actor or dancer, the problem of the impact of performance on the audience mind.
  • At the beginning of the story the author introduces the reader to the charms and flaws of his profession.
  • He says that despite the euphoria he feels on stage, he also receives a devastating impact and broken feelings after the completion of a performance.
  • This complication.
  • In the plot of the story the author and his colleagues describe the scene a great job, the study of all the senses, which is poured into a brilliant production, which is called without a word.
  • The basis of this statement of three monologues, dance of Patrick, his wife Lisa and brother on stage Nicholas Ghana.
  • This performance was a huge success, people came out in tears after their performances.
  • Also, without a word it has been awarded six awards.
  • I believe that such a profession worthy of respect, it's a lot of work and really high standard that those people had been executed perfectly.
  • In my opinion the climax of the story is that the peak of the creation of this product.
  • The author states that this project was both frightening and exciting for him.
  • Not everyone, even creative people can openly tell about their most intimate thoughts of the viewer.
  • In conclusion, I want to say that the language of dance can express the thoughts which find their echo in the hearts of the audience and become a guiding light in their fulfillment.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • The main idea of the story is to make the reader a little touch to the art world, to understand how actors or dancers have to mentally cope with their emotions overflowing, and as shown representations affect the viewers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
    • The author raises a variety of issues of concern, such as psychological problem repressed emotions that could have a detrimental impact on the consciousness of the actor or dancer, the problem of the impact of performance on the audience mind.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • At the beginning of the story the author introduces the reader to the charms and flaws of his profession.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • He says that despite the euphoria he feels on stage, he also receives a devastating impact and broken feelings after the completion of a performance.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • In the plot of the story the author and his colleagues describe the scene a great job, the study of all the senses, which is poured into a brilliant production, which is called without a word.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • The basis of this statement of three monologues, dance of Patrick, his wife Lisa and brother on stage Nicholas Ghana.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
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  • câu 11
    • I believe that such a profession worthy of respect, it's a lot of work and really high standard that those people had been executed perfectly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
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  • câu 15
    • In conclusion, I want to say that the language of dance can express the thoughts which find their echo in the hearts of the audience and become a guiding light in their fulfillment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15