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Were asked the at school.
We were asked to write about Emily Cummins 5 sentences . Who is it? What invented? When invented? What for? Opinion.
I wrote this: 1) Emily Cummins is a inventor who is passionate about sustainable designs that change lives.
2) In 27 years Emily was able to develop a sustainable fridge.
3) The fridge wаs creatid to help people endure the heat.
4)I believe that it is very useful invention, because it helps to save lives.
5) I would like to, and in Russia began to study science.
PLEASE HELP ME!

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- We were asked to write about Emily Cummins 5 sentences . Who is it? What invented? When invented? What for? Opinion.
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- I wrote this: 1) Emily Cummins is a inventor who is passionate about sustainable designs that change lives.
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- 2) In 27 years Emily was able to develop a sustainable fridge.
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- 3) The fridge wаs creatid to help people endure the heat.
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- 4)I believe that it is very useful invention, because it helps to save lives.
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- 5) I would like to, and in Russia began to study science.
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- PLEASE HELP ME!
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