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Were asked the at school.
We were asked to write about Emily Cummins 5 sentences . Who is it? What invented? When invented? What for? Opinion.
I wrote this: 1) Emily Cummins is a inventor who is passionate about sustainable designs that change lives.
2) In 27 years Emily was able to develop a sustainable fridge.
3) The fridge wаs creatid to help people endure the heat.
4)I believe that it is very useful invention, because it helps to save lives.
5) I would like to, and in Russia began to study science.
PLEASE HELP ME!

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- Were asked the at school.
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Τίτλος
Πρόταση 1
- We were asked to write about Emily Cummins 5 sentences . Who is it? What invented? When invented? What for? Opinion.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 1
Πρόταση 2
- I wrote this: 1) Emily Cummins is a inventor who is passionate about sustainable designs that change lives.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 2
Πρόταση 3
- 2) In 27 years Emily was able to develop a sustainable fridge.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 3
Πρόταση 4
- 3) The fridge wаs creatid to help people endure the heat.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 4
Πρόταση 5
- 4)I believe that it is very useful invention, because it helps to save lives.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 5
Πρόταση 6
- 5) I would like to, and in Russia began to study science.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 6
Πρόταση 7
- PLEASE HELP ME!
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 7