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  • Practice English for IELTS band 5.0

  • I am studying English on the Complete IELTS bands 4.0-5.0 book.
  • This is my first writing.
  • The chart provides information about which transport used during visit of the international people go to New Zealand.
  • The most popular transport is car, which 68 percent of visitors use it.
  • Plane and coach are used almost the same amount, about 31 percent.
  • Another 20 percent of visitors travelled by train.
  • However, 7 percent use boat for going.
  • Overall, most visitors go to New Zealand used private transport more popular than public transport.

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