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To begin with, one of the biggest problems that older women facing is the stereotype of housewife work being a natural obligation.
Nowadays, the civilization asserts that the ability of women to maintain the organization and the cleaning is a gift of their nature.
For example, “cooking, cleaning, caring, being teacher and nurse …” is the responsibility of them for love to their family.
To solve this problem, the society, principally children and husbands within families should change these ideas.
For instance, the education in the houses and schools, also the policies could consider the domestics task a job done by women as any other job.
As a result of such action, the older women will have the same opportunities for do other different jobs to be housewife.

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- To begin with, one of the biggest problems that older women facing is the stereotype of housewife work being a natural obligation.
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- Nowadays, the civilization asserts that the ability of women to maintain the organization and the cleaning is a gift of their nature.
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- For example, “cooking, cleaning, caring, being teacher and nurse …” is the responsibility of them for love to their family.
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- To solve this problem, the society, principally children and husbands within families should change these ideas.
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- For instance, the education in the houses and schools, also the policies could consider the domestics task a job done by women as any other job.
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- As a result of such action, the older women will have the same opportunities for do other different jobs to be housewife.
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