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Please make some corrections on my cover letter, as I would like to get a summer job!

Here it is "I was excited to see your opening for a refund assistant advertised on finn.no, and I hope to be invited for an interview.

During my first job working as a salesman I gained experience in a customer service sector, which helped me to prepare myself for a client-oriented role.

This knowledge now allows me to find the best possible solution and adapt to any environment and every circumstance in communication.

My cheerful, energised attitude towards work, combined with my business savvy, landed me my first professional achievement – ranking me in TOP10 best sellers in company out of more than 200 contestants in summer’s seller’s campaign.

Working as a sales manager, I grew more as a team member and understood how to cooperate with individuals with different personalities.

Moreover, I learned to rationally organize and plan work in a high-paced, stressful job.

Also, I would like you to know that I have acquired basic Norwegian language knowledge, which I intentionally picked as one of my courses during this semester’s studies, and worked as a volunteer bartender in Kroa i Bø youth center.

All in all, I believe I’m a strong candidate for this job and I have the expertise to become an integral part of your team.

I consider .... a prestigious company and the chance to join your team would be a tremendous opportunity and honour.

Thank You for your time and consideration."