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  • The shopping center report (C2 exam)

  • Introduction Having been asked from the Council members to write a report about the Shopping center impact on our city I will try to do my best on behalf of our citizenship.
  • I aim to balance on the one hand the second-to-none design of our mall which has become an indoor city perfect for the winter days; and, on the other hand,it is to blame for the disappearing of traditional shops.
  • Rave views and drawbacks over the big shopping center: Firstly, I have a long list of positive facts to say about the effects of the new mall on our city.
  • Regarding the people answers to our survay, it has turned to be a snug environment where families go to spend time with their children.
  • It is true that a lively atmosphere,- amongst top-ten restaurants and leisurely activities such as cinema, amusement park...-, can be easily felt.
  • In addition many new jobs have been created: security guards, children instructors, waiters, waitresses, ushers, usherettes...but they are part time jobs.
  • Eventually, the drawbacks have to do with several aspects: 1st) The location on the outskirts makes it difficult to arrive at without a car, due to the low frequency of public transport.
  • 2nd) Local and traditional shops are going into bankrupcy, and this fact could end obliging all of us to drive to buy at the cheaperand in the end unique mall.
  • People tend to spend several hours enjoying while buying on a daily basis, consequently the do not buy at the shops near their houses.
  • Future developments: I would suggest to increase the frequency on public transport, and if we wanted to avoid the waping-out of local shoppers I would create a Union linked to the council in a way that we might allow the shoppers to run or take an important part in the local festivals when they take place, so by "making a killing" in some days along a year they could survive almost the rest of it.

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English

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  • Setning 1
    • Introduction Having been asked from the Council members to write a report about the Shopping center impact on our city I will try to do my best on behalf of our citizenship.
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    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1
  • Setning 2
    • I aim to balance on the one hand the second-to-none design of our mall which has become an indoor city perfect for the winter days; and, on the other hand,it is to blame for the disappearing of traditional shops.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 2LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 2
  • Setning 3
    • Rave views and drawbacks over the big shopping center: Firstly, I have a long list of positive facts to say about the effects of the new mall on our city.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3
  • Setning 4
    • Regarding the people answers to our survay, it has turned to be a snug environment where families go to spend time with their children.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4
  • Setning 5
    • It is true that a lively atmosphere,- amongst top-ten restaurants and leisurely activities such as cinema, amusement park...-, can be easily felt.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 5LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 5
  • Setning 6
    • In addition many new jobs have been created: security guards, children instructors, waiters, waitresses, ushers, usherettes...but they are part time jobs.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6
  • Setning 7
    • Eventually, the drawbacks have to do with several aspects: 1st) The location on the outskirts makes it difficult to arrive at without a car, due to the low frequency of public transport.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 7LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 7
  • Setning 8
    • 2nd) Local and traditional shops are going into bankrupcy, and this fact could end obliging all of us to drive to buy at the cheaperand in the end unique mall.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 8LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 8
  • Setning 9
  • Setning 10
    • Future developments: I would suggest to increase the frequency on public transport, and if we wanted to avoid the waping-out of local shoppers I would create a Union linked to the council in a way that we might allow the shoppers to run or take an important part in the local festivals when they take place, so by "making a killing" in some days along a year they could survive almost the rest of it.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 10LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 10