Corrections

Text from Catyona - English

  • A part of my resume

  • Sales manager Duties: Coordinated production and selling of two kinds of products: created production plans, purchased raw materials, scheduled cash flow, made decisions of purchasing and selling materials and products, cooperated with customers and suppliers, made reports of activity results.
  • Achievements: Ensured smooth operation of the department during the period of work; was directly involved in the organization of the commercial department during the start-up of new production

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Title
  • Sentence 1
    • Sales manager Duties: Coordinated production and selling of two kinds of products: created production plans, purchased raw materials, scheduled cash flow, made decisions of purchasing and selling materials and products, cooperated with customers and suppliers, made reports of activity results.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • Achievements: Ensured smooth operation of the department during the period of work; was directly involved in the organization of the commercial department during the start-up of new production
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2