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  • Sales manager Duties: Coordinated production and selling of two kinds of products: created production plans, purchased raw materials, scheduled cash flow, made decisions of purchasing and selling materials and products, cooperated with customers and suppliers, made reports of activity results.
  • Achievements: Ensured smooth operation of the department during the period of work; was directly involved in the organization of the commercial department during the start-up of new production

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    • Sales manager Duties: Coordinated production and selling of two kinds of products: created production plans, purchased raw materials, scheduled cash flow, made decisions of purchasing and selling materials and products, cooperated with customers and suppliers, made reports of activity results.
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    • Achievements: Ensured smooth operation of the department during the period of work; was directly involved in the organization of the commercial department during the start-up of new production
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