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從Edwinb來的文本 - English

  • my second written

  • thanks for answered my written, now to be that some words were writen wrong and I can to improve my knowledges in english.
  • I will try write daily and try I wrong less..
  • thanks you for your atention and for your time

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English