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my second written
thanks for answered my written, now to be that some words were writen wrong and I can to improve my knowledges in english.
I will try write daily and try I wrong less..
thanks you for your atention and for your time

Tittel
- my second written
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Tittel
Setning 1
- thanks for answered my written, now to be that some words were writen wrong and I can to improve my knowledges in english.
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1
Setning 2
- I will try write daily and try I wrong less..
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 2
Setning 3
- thanks you for your atention and for your time
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3