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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjaamaton

Text from AlonsoMar - English

  • The Theather Obra

  • Hi, Tuesday I saw a play of my college I will tell you that it was....
  • The play was about five children who playing showed the pain suffred by country for the war with the farc.
  • The play was divided in five chapters and in the first chapter were the 5 children playing and singing like ducks. the kids was jumping the rope and they sing.
  • In the third chapter a kid had a bomb and He think that it is a toy, His mother a scolds He.In the fourth chapter a kid die and his friend can´t see.
  • His friend play and he cry why they don´t see.In the chapter final the kid reborn and his friends help him.
  • The message is that the war is a problem that involves the childhood the my country I never saw a play in my life but is fun totally

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
  • Lause 2
  • Lause 3
    • The play was divided in five chapters and in the first chapter were the 5 children playing and singing like ducks. the kids was jumping the rope and they sing.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
  • Lause 4
    • In the third chapter a kid had a bomb and He think that it is a toy, His mother a scolds He.In the fourth chapter a kid die and his friend can´t see.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
  • Lause 5
  • Lause 6
    • The message is that the war is a problem that involves the childhood the my country I never saw a play in my life but is fun totally
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6