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The Theather Obra
Hi, Tuesday I saw a play of my college I will tell you that it was....
The play was about five children who playing showed the pain suffred by country for the war with the farc.
The play was divided in five chapters and in the first chapter were the 5 children playing and singing like ducks. the kids was jumping the rope and they sing.
In the third chapter a kid had a bomb and He think that it is a toy, His mother a scolds He.In the fourth chapter a kid die and his friend can´t see.
His friend play and he cry why they don´t see.In the chapter final the kid reborn and his friends help him.
The message is that the war is a problem that involves the childhood the my country I never saw a play in my life but is fun totally

Tiêu đề
- The Theather Obra
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câu 1
- Hi, Tuesday I saw a play of my college I will tell you that it was....
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- The play was about five children who playing showed the pain suffred by country for the war with the farc.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- The play was divided in five chapters and in the first chapter were the 5 children playing and singing like ducks. the kids was jumping the rope and they sing.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- In the third chapter a kid had a bomb and He think that it is a toy, His mother a scolds He.In the fourth chapter a kid die and his friend can´t see.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- His friend play and he cry why they don´t see.In the chapter final the kid reborn and his friends help him.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
câu 6
- The message is that the war is a problem that involves the childhood the my country I never saw a play in my life but is fun totally
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6