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  • Freedom of thougth.

  • It's such a hard thing heraing about equality and tolerance when in differents countrys are still under homophobia, racims, macho and other kinds of situations that makes you think, are we really in the 21th ceantury?
  • Media talks about this, and tries put in your mind that these problems don't exist anymore, but the truth is huge.
  • In legal terms homosexuality is not punished now, but this "condition" can make you unemployable, not directly because there are always differents excuses to hide the truth.
  • And is the same thing with the other kinds of segregation.
  • Hey, thank you for reading, I know I don't have a conclusion, this is just for trying this new platform and I didn't know what to write :D I hope I didn't do a lot of mistakes.
  • I forward your answer!

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    • It's such a hard thing heraing about equality and tolerance when in differents countrys are still under homophobia, racims, macho and other kinds of situations that makes you think, are we really in the 21th ceantury?
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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    • Media talks about this, and tries put in your mind that these problems don't exist anymore, but the truth is huge.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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    • In legal terms homosexuality is not punished now, but this "condition" can make you unemployable, not directly because there are always differents excuses to hide the truth.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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    • Hey, thank you for reading, I know I don't have a conclusion, this is just for trying this new platform and I didn't know what to write :D I hope I didn't do a lot of mistakes.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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