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Text z marygg96 - English

  • Freedom of thougth.

  • It's such a hard thing heraing about equality and tolerance when in differents countrys are still under homophobia, racims, macho and other kinds of situations that makes you think, are we really in the 21th ceantury?
  • Media talks about this, and tries put in your mind that these problems don't exist anymore, but the truth is huge.
  • In legal terms homosexuality is not punished now, but this "condition" can make you unemployable, not directly because there are always differents excuses to hide the truth.
  • And is the same thing with the other kinds of segregation.
  • Hey, thank you for reading, I know I don't have a conclusion, this is just for trying this new platform and I didn't know what to write :D I hope I didn't do a lot of mistakes.
  • I forward your answer!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • It's such a hard thing heraing about equality and tolerance when in differents countrys are still under homophobia, racims, macho and other kinds of situations that makes you think, are we really in the 21th ceantury?
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1
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    • Media talks about this, and tries put in your mind that these problems don't exist anymore, but the truth is huge.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2
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    • In legal terms homosexuality is not punished now, but this "condition" can make you unemployable, not directly because there are always differents excuses to hide the truth.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
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  • veta 5
    • Hey, thank you for reading, I know I don't have a conclusion, this is just for trying this new platform and I didn't know what to write :D I hope I didn't do a lot of mistakes.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5
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