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  • Essay about homework. FCE

  • Nowadays parents and children are very busy with their own works, on one hand, parents are working to earn money and children are studying to pass their exams.
  • Furthermore, with the incorporations of women to works, the homework has evolved to share this works with everybody in the house.
  • First at all, almost every parent are working every day and they arrive at home too late for doing activities in the house, another family has a member who doesn’t work so he or she can take part in the house activities but children must help too, but it depends on the season of the year, because in winter they are very busy.
  • Secondly, it obvious that parents have more experience to complete chores more successful than children, however it does not matter to help and learnt about their parents.
  • On the other hand, parents have to teach to children helping at home with simple activities like to lay the table or dust the furniture because it will help them to know how to organize in their lives and take responsibilities.
  • To sum up, Parents and children have to work together at home, but not equally because they have to learn about it and spend free time too. THANKS!

HELP ELKE ZIN TE CORRIGEREN, AUB! - English

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    • Nowadays parents and children are very busy with their own works, on one hand, parents are working to earn money and children are studying to pass their exams.
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    • First at all, almost every parent are working every day and they arrive at home too late for doing activities in the house, another family has a member who doesn’t work so he or she can take part in the house activities but children must help too, but it depends on the season of the year, because in winter they are very busy.
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    • VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 3VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 3
  • Zin 4
    • Secondly, it obvious that parents have more experience to complete chores more successful than children, however it does not matter to help and learnt about their parents.
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    • VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 4VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 4
  • Zin 5
    • On the other hand, parents have to teach to children helping at home with simple activities like to lay the table or dust the furniture because it will help them to know how to organize in their lives and take responsibilities.
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    • VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 5VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 5
  • Zin 6
    • To sum up, Parents and children have to work together at home, but not equally because they have to learn about it and spend free time too. THANKS!
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    • VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 6VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 6