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  • Essay about homework. FCE

  • Nowadays parents and children are very busy with their own works, on one hand, parents are working to earn money and children are studying to pass their exams.
  • Furthermore, with the incorporations of women to works, the homework has evolved to share this works with everybody in the house.
  • First at all, almost every parent are working every day and they arrive at home too late for doing activities in the house, another family has a member who doesn’t work so he or she can take part in the house activities but children must help too, but it depends on the season of the year, because in winter they are very busy.
  • Secondly, it obvious that parents have more experience to complete chores more successful than children, however it does not matter to help and learnt about their parents.
  • On the other hand, parents have to teach to children helping at home with simple activities like to lay the table or dust the furniture because it will help them to know how to organize in their lives and take responsibilities.
  • To sum up, Parents and children have to work together at home, but not equally because they have to learn about it and spend free time too. THANKS!

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English

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  • Setning 1
    • Nowadays parents and children are very busy with their own works, on one hand, parents are working to earn money and children are studying to pass their exams.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1
  • Setning 2
  • Setning 3
    • First at all, almost every parent are working every day and they arrive at home too late for doing activities in the house, another family has a member who doesn’t work so he or she can take part in the house activities but children must help too, but it depends on the season of the year, because in winter they are very busy.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3
  • Setning 4
    • Secondly, it obvious that parents have more experience to complete chores more successful than children, however it does not matter to help and learnt about their parents.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4
  • Setning 5
    • On the other hand, parents have to teach to children helping at home with simple activities like to lay the table or dust the furniture because it will help them to know how to organize in their lives and take responsibilities.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 5LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 5
  • Setning 6
    • To sum up, Parents and children have to work together at home, but not equally because they have to learn about it and spend free time too. THANKS!
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6