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My first poetry
Hello, Today I represent you my first poetry in English.
It is a very badly.
But you will read my verse, please. Hi! What's up bro!
What are you looking for?
Let's go to the party, Go on move your body. Hi! Look around.
You are in crazy town.
Don't be a sad, Everything is not bad. Hi, bro! It's OK!
Go on play your game. Hi, bro! Party time!
Everything is fine!

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- My first poetry
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Sentence 1
- Hello, Today I represent you my first poetry in English.
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Sentence 2
- It is a very badly.
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Sentence 3
- But you will read my verse, please. Hi! What's up bro!
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Sentence 4
- What are you looking for?
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Sentence 5
- Let's go to the party, Go on move your body. Hi! Look around.
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Sentence 6
- You are in crazy town.
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Sentence 7
- Don't be a sad, Everything is not bad. Hi, bro! It's OK!
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Sentence 8
- Go on play your game. Hi, bro! Party time!
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Sentence 9
- Everything is fine!
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