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從Chormar來的文本 - English

  • My first poetry

  • Hello, Today I represent you my first poetry in English.
  • It is a very badly.
  • But you will read my verse, please. Hi! What's up bro!
  • What are you looking for?
  • Let's go to the party, Go on move your body. Hi! Look around.
  • You are in crazy town.
  • Don't be a sad, Everything is not bad. Hi, bro! It's OK!
  • Go on play your game. Hi, bro! Party time!
  • Everything is fine!

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