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Tekst fra Juliejing - English

  • a writing practice in IELTS test

  • Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
  • Do you agree or disagree?
  • The innovation of social media has changed readers' reading habits with an increasing number of people reading news online rather than on newspapers.
  • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
  • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution on people's life due to their harmful composition like lead.
  • Secondly, newspapers are made of wood, to be more precise---trees, which play an important role in refraining people from intaking too many contaminants.
  • While the publication of newspapers causes a great number of trees being cut down, which in turn does harm to people's respiratory system.
  • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
  • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
  • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly trait.

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English

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  • Setning 3
    • The innovation of social media has changed readers' reading habits with an increasing number of people reading news online rather than on newspapers.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3
  • Setning 4
    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4
  • Setning 5
    • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution on people's life due to their harmful composition like lead.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 5LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 5
  • Setning 6
    • Secondly, newspapers are made of wood, to be more precise---trees, which play an important role in refraining people from intaking too many contaminants.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6
  • Setning 7
    • While the publication of newspapers causes a great number of trees being cut down, which in turn does harm to people's respiratory system.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 7LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 7
  • Setning 8
    • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 8LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 8
  • Setning 9
    • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 9LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 9
  • Setning 10
    • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly trait.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 10LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 10