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  • A PROPOSAL TO CARE FOR THE ENVIRONMENT FROM THE COLLEGE

  • A WAY TO CARE FOR THE ENVIRONMENT FROM THE COLLEGE In view of the fact that our college is little concerned about environmental issues, the student committee has decided to make some proposals to improve the environment.
  • A BETTER USE OF THE ENERGY The student committee believes that an improvement in the energy efficiency could be done.
  • This would be a great fact for our environment and a way to save money for the college.
  • For instance, it would be a good idea to change the lights of the hall.
  • They are all the time switched on.
  • Then if the college instals led bulbs, not only we will not reduce the pollution to the atmosphere but also, the college will spend less money because those bulbs are energy-saving.
  • EMPLOY ENVIRONMENTALLY FRIENDLY PRODUCTS We have paid attention to the products used by the charwomen of the college.
  • They are very harmful for the environment.
  • Thus, from our point of view, those products should be changed by others which do not damage our planet.
  • Although they are more expensive, the student committee are determined to carry out a campaign to collect money from the students of the college.
  • WASTE We know that the college waste a lot due to the fact that there are thousands of students studying in it, it has got a big dining room...
  • Therefore, as it is impossible to reduce the wastes, as far as we are concerned, recycle is a good way to take advantage of them.
  • Thus, in our view, it is important to instal different trash bins for the plastic, the garbage, the pieces of glass and so on.
  • This is only a summary of the ideas we have.
  • So we would be glad to explain you more thoughts in more detail and finding solutions to other problems concerned with the environment.

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    • A WAY TO CARE FOR THE ENVIRONMENT FROM THE COLLEGE In view of the fact that our college is little concerned about environmental issues, the student committee has decided to make some proposals to improve the environment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • A BETTER USE OF THE ENERGY The student committee believes that an improvement in the energy efficiency could be done.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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  • câu 4
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  • câu 6
    • Then if the college instals led bulbs, not only we will not reduce the pollution to the atmosphere but also, the college will spend less money because those bulbs are energy-saving.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • EMPLOY ENVIRONMENTALLY FRIENDLY PRODUCTS We have paid attention to the products used by the charwomen of the college.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Thus, from our point of view, those products should be changed by others which do not damage our planet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • Although they are more expensive, the student committee are determined to carry out a campaign to collect money from the students of the college.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • WASTE We know that the college waste a lot due to the fact that there are thousands of students studying in it, it has got a big dining room...
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • Therefore, as it is impossible to reduce the wastes, as far as we are concerned, recycle is a good way to take advantage of them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • Thus, in our view, it is important to instal different trash bins for the plastic, the garbage, the pieces of glass and so on.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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  • câu 15
    • So we would be glad to explain you more thoughts in more detail and finding solutions to other problems concerned with the environment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15