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  • A letter of application

  • Dear Mr Peabody, I saw your advertisement in the latest edition of Huffingnton Post journal and I am writting to apply for the bar and restaurant staff position.
  • I am a twenty years-old gastronomy student interested in expand my horizons in the hotel industry.
  • I have a great deal of experience as a kitchen assistant due to the fact that I have been working at the kitchen’s of muy parent’s restaurant since I was 14 years old, and even before I used to accompany them during theirs workdays helping in any way possible.
  • Besides working at my family bussines, I participated in a cocktail course which prepared me to serve any drink.
  • Even though English is not my native language I have recently got an Advanced level certificate.
  • Moreover, to improve my language skills I spent the last summer in Edinburgh participating in an Au Pair program.
  • I am confident I would be well suited to the job: I am willing to work long hours and profit this oppotunity to demonstrate my cuisine abilities and to give the best of me.
  • I hope you will consider my application.
  • Yours faithfully, William Bennet

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    • Dear Mr Peabody, I saw your advertisement in the latest edition of Huffingnton Post journal and I am writting to apply for the bar and restaurant staff position.
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    • I have a great deal of experience as a kitchen assistant due to the fact that I have been working at the kitchen’s of muy parent’s restaurant since I was 14 years old, and even before I used to accompany them during theirs workdays helping in any way possible.
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    • Besides working at my family bussines, I participated in a cocktail course which prepared me to serve any drink.
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    • Moreover, to improve my language skills I spent the last summer in Edinburgh participating in an Au Pair program.
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    • I am confident I would be well suited to the job: I am willing to work long hours and profit this oppotunity to demonstrate my cuisine abilities and to give the best of me.
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