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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Non corrigé

Rédigé par Juliya1235 - English

  • Choice of profession

  • Some people think that young people should follow in their parents' footsteps when choosing a profession.
  • The problem of the choice of a profession is familiar to everyone.
  • It is a common knowledge that it is a touchy subject for many modern teenagers.
  • It seems to me that young men should take into account relatives' footsteps when they pick a vacation.
  • Indeed, parents can share the experience of their professions.
  • Thanks to this teenagers have opportunities to become a good specialists.
  • You would probably agree with me that today parents and children have hardships in their communication.
  • Their belonging to similar areas of activity may solve this problem.
  • In this case, young generation and old generation have more points of contact.
  • Some opponents might say that following the parents' footsteps is impossible in our modern world.
  • Many professions which were popular twenty years ago become unclaimed today.
  • The following the steps of the parents may worsen a cash position children.
  • Secondly, the picking of a job is a very personal case.
  • A work must be pleasure.
  • I believe that human should like this vacation and does this work with enjoyment.
  • However, I disagree with their contentions.
  • We shouldn't disregard the fact that the continuity of generations gives significant advantages to peopke and society.
  • All in all, the choise of profession is an individual and important case.

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