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Text from carlos_alb - English

  • My parents want me to go on holidays with them but I would

  • prefer to go somewhere with my friends.
  • ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi Mike, It was so nice to hear from you.
  • Firstly, I think like you so in winter you always travel with your parents.
  • Moreover, you are 18 years old so If I were you, I would spend every summer with my friends.
  • Secondly, you can do many things like going to the party, hanging out with your friends, sunbathing and getting tan, get drunking, going for a walk...
  • Moreover, If you want to work, you will can work although you start to work as a waiter.
  • Also I'm sure that you're going to flirt with many girls.
  • I hope you all have a great weekend.

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