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My parents want me to go on holidays with them but I would
prefer to go somewhere with my friends.
------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi Mike, It was so nice to hear from you.
Firstly, I think like you so in winter you always travel with your parents.
Moreover, you are 18 years old so If I were you, I would spend every summer with my friends.
Secondly, you can do many things like going to the party, hanging out with your friends, sunbathing and getting tan, get drunking, going for a walk...
Moreover, If you want to work, you will can work although you start to work as a waiter.
Also I'm sure that you're going to flirt with many girls.
I hope you all have a great weekend.

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- My parents want me to go on holidays with them but I would
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- prefer to go somewhere with my friends.
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句子 2
- ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi Mike, It was so nice to hear from you.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Firstly, I think like you so in winter you always travel with your parents.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Moreover, you are 18 years old so If I were you, I would spend every summer with my friends.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Secondly, you can do many things like going to the party, hanging out with your friends, sunbathing and getting tan, get drunking, going for a walk...
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
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- Moreover, If you want to work, you will can work although you start to work as a waiter.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Also I'm sure that you're going to flirt with many girls.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I hope you all have a great weekend.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8