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Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.
Kallie had a bad day at school.
She didn't get to go outside and play at recess.
Kallie said the reason that her teacher thought they should play inside games to day because of the new girl, Wendy.
Next time, they played outside.
Kallie noticed Wendy sitting in her wheelchair.
No one talk to her anything.
The next day, Kallie came next to Wendy and asked:"Do you like to draw?" And Wendy said yes.
They talked with each other.
Kallie had a cat names Rascal and Wendy had a cat names Midnight.
They talked like old friends.
They were talking, laughing, drawing about Rascal and Midnight.

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- Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.
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문장 1
- Kallie had a bad day at school.
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문장 2
- She didn't get to go outside and play at recess.
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문장 3
- Kallie said the reason that her teacher thought they should play inside games to day because of the new girl, Wendy.
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문장 4
- Next time, they played outside.
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문장 5
- Kallie noticed Wendy sitting in her wheelchair.
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문장 6
- No one talk to her anything.
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문장 7
- The next day, Kallie came next to Wendy and asked:"Do you like to draw?" And Wendy said yes.
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문장 8
- They talked with each other.
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문장 9
- Kallie had a cat names Rascal and Wendy had a cat names Midnight.
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문장 10
- They talked like old friends.
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문장 11
- They were talking, laughing, drawing about Rascal and Midnight.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11