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Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.
Kallie had a bad day at school.
She didn't get to go outside and play at recess.
Kallie said the reason that her teacher thought they should play inside games to day because of the new girl, Wendy.
Next time, they played outside.
Kallie noticed Wendy sitting in her wheelchair.
No one talk to her anything.
The next day, Kallie came next to Wendy and asked:"Do you like to draw?" And Wendy said yes.
They talked with each other.
Kallie had a cat names Rascal and Wendy had a cat names Midnight.
They talked like old friends.
They were talking, laughing, drawing about Rascal and Midnight.

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- Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.
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句子 1
- Kallie had a bad day at school.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- She didn't get to go outside and play at recess.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Kallie said the reason that her teacher thought they should play inside games to day because of the new girl, Wendy.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Next time, they played outside.
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句子 5
- Kallie noticed Wendy sitting in her wheelchair.
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句子 6
- No one talk to her anything.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- The next day, Kallie came next to Wendy and asked:"Do you like to draw?" And Wendy said yes.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- They talked with each other.
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句子 9
- Kallie had a cat names Rascal and Wendy had a cat names Midnight.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- They talked like old friends.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10
句子 11
- They were talking, laughing, drawing about Rascal and Midnight.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11