添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

HananHeroからのテキスト - English

  • The Little Pony..

  • Once upon a time, there was a pony who was living with his mother a quiet, happy life in a beautiful farm.
  • Sometimes they would race, other times they would pasture.
  • They used to be together all the time, she wouldn't leave him nor he would.
  • And when it's night time, both of them go to the farmyard to sleep peacefully.
  • One day, suddenly, the little pony started to feel bored and that he couldn't bear living in their beautiful farm anymore.
  • So he wanted to search for another place to live.
  • The mother said with grief :"Where are we going? and to who will we leave the farm? it's the land of our fathers and ancestors".
  • But the pony was so determined and decided to leave, he said goodbye to his mother, but she didn't let him go alone, so she left with him shedding tears.
  • They walked past the wide lands, and whenever they passed by a land, they would it taken by other animals who won't allow them to stay.
  • The night came and they hadn't found a place to stay, so the slept in the outdoors hungry and scared.
  • After this bitter experience, the pony decided to go back to his farm, the land of his father and grandfathers, where food is plentiful and peace is dominant.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English