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  • The Little Pony..

  • Once upon a time, there was a pony who was living with his mother a quiet, happy life in a beautiful farm.
  • Sometimes they would race, other times they would pasture.
  • They used to be together all the time, she wouldn't leave him nor he would.
  • And when it's night time, both of them go to the farmyard to sleep peacefully.
  • One day, suddenly, the little pony started to feel bored and that he couldn't bear living in their beautiful farm anymore.
  • So he wanted to search for another place to live.
  • The mother said with grief :"Where are we going? and to who will we leave the farm? it's the land of our fathers and ancestors".
  • But the pony was so determined and decided to leave, he said goodbye to his mother, but she didn't let him go alone, so she left with him shedding tears.
  • They walked past the wide lands, and whenever they passed by a land, they would it taken by other animals who won't allow them to stay.
  • The night came and they hadn't found a place to stay, so the slept in the outdoors hungry and scared.
  • After this bitter experience, the pony decided to go back to his farm, the land of his father and grandfathers, where food is plentiful and peace is dominant.

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  • câu 1
    • Once upon a time, there was a pony who was living with his mother a quiet, happy life in a beautiful farm.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 5
    • One day, suddenly, the little pony started to feel bored and that he couldn't bear living in their beautiful farm anymore.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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  • câu 7
    • The mother said with grief :"Where are we going? and to who will we leave the farm? it's the land of our fathers and ancestors".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • But the pony was so determined and decided to leave, he said goodbye to his mother, but she didn't let him go alone, so she left with him shedding tears.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • They walked past the wide lands, and whenever they passed by a land, they would it taken by other animals who won't allow them to stay.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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  • câu 11
    • After this bitter experience, the pony decided to go back to his farm, the land of his father and grandfathers, where food is plentiful and peace is dominant.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11